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©2004-2009 ~Ariellis
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Underneath the clock i feel my weary heart is put to rest
you gather around your friends
the connection that you feel when the night has not yet died
you are new with a promise of a love
you will probably never find
and touch that you can really feel

the brokenness inside,
the hope and this collide
and nothing is real

and there is nothing more i want than just one night
that’s free of doubt and sadness
one night that i can really feel.
-Now For

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Model: ~illixim

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:iconlieutlaww:
Cool Pic Excellent words good work :hug:
:iconariellis:
thank ya Mr. Laww...
Hehe... :hug:

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:iconmoonbeam13:
Great use of shadow in this one. You've really manipulated the light to further push the feeling of dankness and despair. I'm not sure how I feel about the cloth on the right hand side, I haven't decided if I find it more of a distraction then a help but aside from that you've done a great job :)

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:iconillixim:
Ooo! Yes, you've made me look very dark and anguished! Awesomely (possumly) done! :glomp:

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Hear a tune beneath confusion, make sense of something wrong,
Believe in truth as strong as lies, you shall remain alone,
My very soul is in this tune, my heart within my song,
And never can you steal that, for my voice is all my own.
:iconwickedoubt:
there's such a dark feeling to this one
kindof something out of a horror film
i like it alot :)

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You can't believe how a simple problem can be solved so complicatedly
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:iconariellis:
Ehehe... it kinda reminds me of Samara from the ring... kinda.. scares me, eheh, thanks bebs :hug:

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Love never fails. For when perfection comes, the imperfect disappears.

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:iconariellis:
the cloth just... happened to be there... I never really expected this to turn out, it was sorda spontanious, but yeah... thankies dearie :hug:

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Love never fails. For when perfection comes, the imperfect disappears.

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:daprints: - My Prints
:iconfakeplacebo:
This is a good piece. I like the composition, and the general idea of it.

However, at certain points it is confusing. For instance, what is that shadow on the wall? It looks like a rug or some sort of fabric, but with the composition, it is hard to tell. Perhaps that could be edited. Also, the clarity is a little fuzzy when the full version is brought up. On her hand especially, which could very well have been the focus of the picture otherwise. Perhaps adjusting the iso settings would help this. I am not sure. However, if both of these issues were cleared up, the piece would look better, I think.

Good job. I like it.
:iconariellis:
*pokes you*
So I have... mwaha :hug:

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Love never fails. For when perfection comes, the imperfect disappears.

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November 7, 2004
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OLYMPUS OPTICAL CO.,LTD
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